Thursday, December 9, 2010
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
recount
I was running towards the long jump pit I jumped with all my might I got a 2! Normally I would have gotten a 1 I did achieve my goal to get a 2 or higher. My Favorited event was the long jump but I think I could of done better. The hurdles were the hardest because they were so tall.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Expert
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
best wirting
vis lang

what did i do well my ideas
what is my next step to scan propaly
Tuesday, August 31, 2010
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
self assessments
i am not very good at doing self assessments because i don't put much work into them and don't really care about them.
Tuesday, August 3, 2010
Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
my alien
He is about the size of a adult human. He works in teams with his species but will kill any other species of alien. His species have great powerful armies and will wipe out any other civilization if given a chance.They where white and black armor.He is very organized.His name is the forbidden. They are deadly. they will fight to the death. They carry swords and hammers with them. They are very smart and build amazing machines called walkers that are robots with people inside them. His helmet is like the head of a tiger. His body armor is like the body of a man.he walks on two legs. his eyes are blue.
s.a
what did i learn: to make it better with slimes
what i do well: i made it descriptive.
next step: put in allerion
s.a
what did i learn: to make it better with slimes
what i do well: i made it descriptive.
next step: put in allerion
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Monday, May 24, 2010
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Monday, April 26, 2010
pi coments
Comments By (all names in your group please)
I wasn't sure that your topic would be very interesting to people, but it was. I like the way you had a lot of pictures and didn't repeat the words on the slides with your spoken words. You really need to slow your speech down as it was pretty hard to understand all that you said. More of an explanation of how the game is played would also help. Well done for a first PI. TC
i think it was a good PI because it was interesting and the models were cool Thomas
aidan was very good at speaking clearly. those are AWESOME pictures. Linda'Emma
I know you chose it because of hobby league. We liked the pictures. cool p.i Aidin alan & caleb
Cool Pictures Aidan and good Powerpoint but next time use a bit more expression and talk a more slowly, but it was cool anyway! Lucy and Maddy
we liked the way you showed use how they work but next time tell use how to play cool pi Grace, Zia
It was very interesting Aidan. Mabey next time you could put more imformation but any way it was great!!!!!!!! Ollie
Interesting PI we learnt a little bit of the game and we learnt about all the machines next time have a auto clicker well done but you could speak a little clearer. Kelly,Nat
we think you did great with all the information but next time speak clearly sophie,sara
Good Job Aidan and interesting topic, cool pictures, we heard you clearly but maybe next time when you say next say in lower so the class cant hear you. Good work :) Britt, Natalya and Alana
Cool P.I we liked the cars and trucks but you could work on speaking clearly and a bit slower otherwise it was a awsome P.I!!!! Hadley Corbin
nice war game Adian it was really good you put lots of great pictures and information into so good on you. so congrats Adian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kale and caelum
cool P.I aidan we liked your war game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! harry chaz
hannah
Sa
what did i learn: i learnt to but more info on .
what did i do well: i put cool pics on it.
what is my next step: tell them about the game.
I wasn't sure that your topic would be very interesting to people, but it was. I like the way you had a lot of pictures and didn't repeat the words on the slides with your spoken words. You really need to slow your speech down as it was pretty hard to understand all that you said. More of an explanation of how the game is played would also help. Well done for a first PI. TC
i think it was a good PI because it was interesting and the models were cool Thomas
aidan was very good at speaking clearly. those are AWESOME pictures. Linda'Emma
I know you chose it because of hobby league. We liked the pictures. cool p.i Aidin alan & caleb
Cool Pictures Aidan and good Powerpoint but next time use a bit more expression and talk a more slowly, but it was cool anyway! Lucy and Maddy
we liked the way you showed use how they work but next time tell use how to play cool pi Grace, Zia
It was very interesting Aidan. Mabey next time you could put more imformation but any way it was great!!!!!!!! Ollie
Interesting PI we learnt a little bit of the game and we learnt about all the machines next time have a auto clicker well done but you could speak a little clearer. Kelly,Nat
we think you did great with all the information but next time speak clearly sophie,sara
Good Job Aidan and interesting topic, cool pictures, we heard you clearly but maybe next time when you say next say in lower so the class cant hear you. Good work :) Britt, Natalya and Alana
Cool P.I we liked the cars and trucks but you could work on speaking clearly and a bit slower otherwise it was a awsome P.I!!!! Hadley Corbin
nice war game Adian it was really good you put lots of great pictures and information into so good on you. so congrats Adian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kale and caelum
cool P.I aidan we liked your war game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! harry chaz
hannah
Sa
what did i learn: i learnt to but more info on .
what did i do well: i put cool pics on it.
what is my next step: tell them about the game.
Sunday, April 25, 2010
Thursday, April 22, 2010
Monday, April 19, 2010
goal
what i did well was keep top bit of the desks tidy
what did i learn that tidy desks helps
next step tidy desks tidy
what did i learn that tidy desks helps
next step tidy desks tidy
Tuesday, March 30, 2010
Sunday, March 28, 2010
visual langage
Wednesday, March 24, 2010
Monday, March 22, 2010
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Sunday, February 21, 2010
Thursday, February 18, 2010
maths test
ball thorw
Monday, February 15, 2010
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
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