Monday, April 26, 2010

pi coments

Comments By (all names in your group please)
I wasn't sure that your topic would be very interesting to people, but it was. I like the way you had a lot of pictures and didn't repeat the words on the slides with your spoken words. You really need to slow your speech down as it was pretty hard to understand all that you said. More of an explanation of how the game is played would also help. Well done for a first PI. TC
i think it was a good PI because it was interesting and the models were cool Thomas
aidan was very good at speaking clearly. those are AWESOME pictures. Linda'Emma
I know you chose it because of hobby league. We liked the pictures. cool p.i Aidin alan & caleb
Cool Pictures Aidan and good Powerpoint but next time use a bit more expression and talk a more slowly, but it was cool anyway! Lucy and Maddy
we liked the way you showed use how they work but next time tell use how to play cool pi Grace, Zia
It was very interesting Aidan. Mabey next time you could put more imformation but any way it was great!!!!!!!! Ollie
Interesting PI we learnt a little bit of the game and we learnt about all the machines next time have a auto clicker well done but you could speak a little clearer. Kelly,Nat
we think you did great with all the information but next time speak clearly sophie,sara
Good Job Aidan and interesting topic, cool pictures, we heard you clearly but maybe next time when you say next say in lower so the class cant hear you. Good work :) Britt, Natalya and Alana
Cool P.I we liked the cars and trucks but you could work on speaking clearly and a bit slower otherwise it was a awsome P.I!!!! Hadley Corbin
nice war game Adian it was really good you put lots of great pictures and information into so good on you. so congrats Adian!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kale and caelum
cool P.I aidan we liked your war game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! harry chaz
what did i learn: i learnt to but more info on .
what did i do well: i put cool pics on it.
what is my next step: tell them about the game.

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Thursday, April 22, 2010

home fun

i got 64%
i cant believe i got 64 %

Monday, April 19, 2010


what i did well was keep top bit of the desks tidy
what did i learn that tidy desks helps
next step tidy desks tidy