Tuesday, June 22, 2010

my alien

He is about the size of a adult human. He works in teams with his species but will kill any other species of alien. His species have great powerful armies and will wipe out any other civilization if given a chance.They where white and black armor.He is very organized.His name is the forbidden. They are deadly. they will fight to the death. They carry swords and hammers with them. They are very smart and build amazing machines called walkers that are robots with people inside them. His helmet is like the head of a tiger. His body armor is like the body of a man.he walks on two legs. his eyes are blue.


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what did i learn: to make it better with slimes
what i do well: i made it descriptive.
next step: put in allerion

1 comment:

  1. Your alien sounds interesting and a bit scary. Not somebody I want to meet since he only likes aliens of his own kind. Remember to proof read your writing so it is easier for us to understand.

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